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Warriors: Wishing star :: Thunderclan :: Thunderclan camp :: Main Clearing :: Fresh-Kill Pile

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Fresh-Kill Pile
« Thread Started on Jun 18, 2007, 6:05am »

OK everyone, just post a little something and say how much fresh kill you brought.

Example(good):
Featherstar padded into the clearing. She dropped 3 mice and a bird in the fresh-kill pile. Her mouth watered at the scent. She picked up a scrawny rabbit and went to go eat.

New:
3 mice
1 bird

Old:
1 rabbit
1 adder

Example(bad):
Featherstar went over to the fresh-kill pile. She recognised someone she knew.
"Hey Leafpelt!"
she said.

DON'T DO THAT BY THE FRESH-KILL PILE!! Post how much the last person put and your new fresh-kill.

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Re: Fresh-Kill Pile
« Reply #1 on Jun 22, 2007, 10:38pm »

Aquaheart padded to the fresh-kill pile slowly. Her mouth was full with prey that she had just caught. Dropping one huge starling, two voles, one shrew, one sparrow, one pigeon and three mice. She took one bird and padded to where warriors eat.

New:
1 Starling
1 shrew
2 voles
1 Sparrow
1 pigeon
3 Mice

Old:
1 Rabbit
1 Adder
3 Mice

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